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3752_Scene Analysis Rewrite
Scene Analysis
In the studio for make Suntory whisky commercial. Japanese Director who not speaks in English is explaining what he wants to be on scene and a Japanese woman interpreter who is either unable or unwilling to translate everything the director is rattling on about for Bob (Main Actor). Because of lost translation make Bob goes on the set and tries to understand the director through a demure interpreter.
Mise-en-scene:
This scene is set as activity in the studio which have many Japanese crew such as Director who wearing sun glasses, Japanese interpreter and etc. For make a whisky commercial advertisement. The scene set as European style bar with crystal glass of whisky. Bob who is main character is wearing shawl collared tuxedo who hold crystal glass and drink the whisky then say the slogan ”For relaxing time, make it Suntory time”
Color:
Normal color with blue in studio. Soft and warm color in sequence of whisky commercial.
Sound:
Use diagetic sound which talk between Characters
Music:
No music in this scene
Dialog:
3 people in conversation involve.
1. Director is rattling speak to quick explain how the concept and atmosphere in the whisky commercial scene.
2. Interpreter coordinate outfit translate to Bob which is not clear.
3. And Bob, Main character is listening and tries to catch up words then ask questions to repeat his understand.
Contrast Area:
In the studio, background look bright, clear and feel like in Japan and Japanese studio atmosphere contrast with the set up scene of whisky commercial which look soft and warm to make a feel for relax and feel like European style.
Lighting:
Normal setting light in the scene as studio and warm and spot light at set up scene of whisky commercial
Editing:
Time: 30 second
Editing Style:
It is a short sequence to show what the director explain and jump cut to Bob then pan to how the translator translate to main actor and the feeling express by face of main character.
Transitions:
There transitions between the shots for a reason to show what happen and like they are making advertise of whisky commercial in Japanese studio
Cinematography
Shot type:
Medium sh ot, long shot and close up shot
Camera Angle:
Over the shoulder
Camera Movement:
Camera close up to look at director and pan movement of director then jump cut to main actor
Depth of field:
Everything in the sequence set up is clearly.
Total composition:
There use the common transitions to cross fades from one image to the next.
Character analysis
Character relationship (proxemics):
The Director explain want he want and atmosphere around for whisky commercial to Japanese interpreter coordinate to translation for Bob and he is a actor who play the scene dialog in whisky commercial.
Character movement: 3 characters movement
1. Director move left, right and turn around within the shot.
2. Interpreter move forward to Bob.
3. Bob is sitting on the chair, move his head and show face expression
Deconstructed
This s cene is expressing another side of lost in translation. There are the different place and also different language to understand. The plot in Lost in translation like culture shock phases. They are like a fish without water.
The main slogan for the whisky had hit.
”For relaxing time, make it Suntory time”
They have many videos clip had made imitate
such as below samples.
Reference: You tube
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Memento
Director: christopher Nolan
Genre: Crime Drama Mystery Thriller
Synopsis: A man got one condition that can’t make any new memory, but he want to get revenge for his wife, he can only get memory from photos tattoo, and notes he write for himself, how to find and kill the right person under this condition, you’ll see in this movie.
Duration: Time: 2.50-----3.50
Mise-en-scene: Lenny and Teddy both show up during this period, and Teddy was dead at the beginning, the situation is Lenny hold a gun to shoot Teddy in a dark room.
Colors: At the beginning is color, after playing back the scene Lenny killed Teddy, change to black and white. Color one start first, during that time, we can see definitely something happened between Lenny and Teddy, and we would curious why he killed Teddy, then color change to black white. Lenny start to talk about himself, then we start getting some information to understand the plot.
Sound: For the color one at the beginning, silence first, then we can hear some mystery music, but just for a very short time, then change to the black and white one, we can hear the monologue of Lenny.
Dialogue: for the color one at first, no any dialogue, but for the black and white part, there was some monologue from Lenny. Then when the color change back to the color, some dialogue between the reception man, and then Lenny shows up, he start talking with Lenny.
Edit: playback, jump cut and the fade transition for changing black and white to color, and almost all the cut used jump cut, and the playback make audience feel intersting and curious about the movie.
Camera: close up, on shoulder, extreme close up, and use the low camera angle, the extream close up for the bullet, gun ,and glasses with blood, just few simple stuff show that someone dead by shot. And the high camera angle for shooting Lenny was lying on the bed of the motel.
Analysis of this peirod: This is the beginning of the movie, so the director are supposed to make audience understand some basic things, first, the color one, Teddy was dead at the beginning, but some playback tell that this is the end or, not happened yet, and then jump cut to the black and white, through the monologue, we can tell Lenny didn’t know what’s going on at all, he was totally lost, and he didn’t know how long he had been stayed at the motel, then the color changed back, Lenny was talking to the reception man, and according to the dialogue, we can see Lenny got some kind of condition, through the picture of Teddy and note on the picture, that can tell Teddy and Lenny are not very familiar or Teddy got some memory problem. And then, Lenny didn’t know if he had told Teddy about his condition or not, that’s more like memory problem. All this setting pave the way for the plot of this movie. Through this one minute, maybe we’re still confused, but all the suspense left to the audience makes people want to know what would happen next. And we can see Lenny killed Teddy at the beginning, obviously, there was something wrong between them, but when Lenny walked out from the motel, they are together and it seems like they are friends, though Lenny didn’t remember Teddy at all, he showed the photo of Teddy to the reception man, and then Teddy shows up, but when Lenny saw him, he was a little bit confused, we would wonder why Lenny got one photo of Teddy, but he can’t remember him at all. And what would happen that lead lenny kill teddy. Tow main character shows up in this one minutes, and the director explained the conflict would happen between these tow man , and at the end , one die, the audience would starting wondering the plot, and become interested in the film, especially for the ending, people would ask what kind of movie it is, and what condition Lenny got, and this condition brings what ending to Lenny, a lot of questions set up in this one minutes, so it’s a good beginning for got audience attention, the proportion between question and answers was in a good balance, the audience got some information and also more questions. So as I mentioned before, we can tell christopher Nolan is pretty good at set the plot for audience, a man lost his memory and with a lot of questions on him and he is even confusing about himself, but his purpose is get revenge for his wife, how ridiculous it is, and through his tattoo we can realise that he definetly got something to do and he can’t forget it, that’s why he put these thing on his body, No doubt about it, he is a question, and through the conversation between Lenny and the reception man, we can tell though Lenny can’t remember what happened, he knows what kind of condition he is in. And while he was showing the picture of Teddy, teddy showed up, then we can’t help thinking why he killed the Teddy at the first scene, cause at that time, they were just like friends, and we would also start thinking what kind of person Teddy is, is he the murder? Or Lenny killed the wrong person, the director make those tow main charactors show up in this one minute, but just in one minute, he introduce how mysterious lenny is, and make us think whether Teddy is good or bad person, why at the beginning, he was killed by lenny, this is a big suspense for audience, and the more intersting part is how a man who is under this condition can find the murder and got revenge for his wife, cause he even can’t remember anything and anyone new. The excellent part for the beginning part is the director introduce the charactors and set up a lot of questions at the same time. And anothing is the director divide the movie into two part, one is black and white, another is color. Maybe it would confuse us at the beginning, but after you watching the whole movie, you will find this is one clever part for this movie, the black and white part tell the story clockwisely, and the color one goes anti-clockwise, then you can easily find which scene fit which one.
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Scene Analysis
August 14,2010
Lost in translation
By sofia coppola
Chapter 5 : INT. PARK HYATT – NIGHT
From :00:03:11—00:03:51
Student number:3439
Name : Ruby
I. SCENE OVERVIEW
It’s the front part of this movie, during long time to staying at the car, finally, Bob arrival the hotel. The director uses very smart way to snow how Bob’s mood. Bob stand in the back of a crowded elevator surrounded by Japanese businessmen below his shoulders.
The elevator stops at the 50th floor and the doors open onto the massive, streamline lobby of the Park Hyatt.
Bob follows the JAPENESE BUSINESSMEN out into the marble and glass lobby that frames the view of Tokyo.
The CONCIERGE and several eager HOTEL MANAGERS greet Bob. He just wants to sleep, but more STAFF continues to greet him, ask him about his fright. They lead him to reception.
II. SHOT ANALYSIS
Shot 1: 40 Seconds
Sounds : there is no sounds effets
Shot Size: short shot to close shot
Contrast Dominants: This shot demonstrated the man first time come to Japan. By his action we can feel his Psychological activity.
Camera Movement: At the beginning, while the character in the elevator .The camera move is it stationary. And then the camera is movement, the type of movement is that is it t tracking motion .Is the motion panning. The camera move to follow the characters.
Depth of Field:
There are too quite envirvonment in this lift. This scene has been built by four shots, the shots focus on people’s face, that audience can catch or guess the some information at the beginning of movie straight way. All of Japanese was looks normal, maybe they thinking about some business, however, Bob was looks tired more than the other people. In this case, during this lift which is a narrowness space, Bob was in this crowded space, he just want to this lift didn’t stop, let him have a rest, during this scenes, Sofia Coppola make 7 seconds on it , is a quite long shot used on this not very important shot ,however ,just this lots of details to give accidence understand how tired and loneness he is .
Shot2 :
Sounds: assistant’s voice
Camera angle: close shot
Depth of Field: This is the first scene of the movie, why director put this scene here? Because Bob is in another country, director wants use this family letter to express Bob’s lonely feeling. Audience maybe thinks why put this scene here, to cause he more and more annoyance. Usually, although he is a star, he also has many stresses. Such as this message that Bob readied, put on began of this movie hint of later development in a story.
Shot3 :
Shot Type: medium shot
Camera angle: Then the camera becomes medium shot.
Character Proteomics: There is more than one character. Their relationship to each other within the frame. Express with their greet to each other. They are much closed. Their body language used to communicate a message to us. Express with Bow and Handshake.
Depth of Field:
Bob just follow the hotel waiter, He pretended to be pleased, and accepted gift walk to his room. Since he read that massage from his wife, he gets to cause annoyance. Even thouth he is artist and super star ,he also have lots of pressure and troboule from media and family
Cheerful expression was compare with Bob’s tired eyes, in this scene, there is not close shot to his face, but we can saw the whole shot of Bob and the other people compare with him.
Shot 4:
Lighting: The lighting in this shot is very low key. In the beginning of the shot, the business man is soft light with no clear motivation. As he moves, he steps out from elevator the light is no change and it is very nature.
Camera angle: the camera angle is even close to his back level.
Sounds: While he was passing with the crowed in hotel road, haven’t some sounds effect, however, maybe in Bob’s heart have a song named “tired”.
Depth of Field: Began the camera follow Bob’s back, this scene we think about Sofia Coppola make a question about this medium shot, bob accepted gift from hotel service, then he didn’t open it, over wise he walk fast, as we know, this is just a beginning of this lonely journey. What is the modern and fashion hotel in Tokyo. The bustling cities and his mood contrast it. The mysterious city, he was so tired. The lens for night he was about this long and lonely travelling.
Shot 5:
Sound: At the beginning, it is very quite. And with one moment elevator bell sounds. Is the sound diabetic with characters talking? The music had a steady atmosphere. Also, this part still with sounds.
Color Usage: The colors are very neutral and downplayed in this shot.
Depth of Field: This is the last scene in this case; waiter pushed his package and follow Bob. Bob just want to get a room and have a good rest, he don’t care about his package or gifts. Long time journey makes him so tired and bored. At this time, director use very low sounds and people crowed sounds effect to let audience to know, Bob was so falsely emotional and how old and poor he is. Maybe he waiting someone to help him and talk to him, then next part, Actress was coming soon. All of the next part need this scene to introduce and summary.